http://hikarievandar.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] hikarievandar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] darkhairedgirl 2016-08-17 08:06 pm (UTC)

This was wonderful - I adore the way you wrote Pansy. And Justin! There's so much potential between them! <3

My favourite line by far is: her father is soft and well-educated, patient with his son and indulgent of his only daughter. He collects bibles, for Merlin’s sake, old bloody manuscripts, not torture implements or antique poisons. I love it when Death Eaters are written as more than the two-dimensional villains they are in canon, and you've given Astor Parkinson some real depth.

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