ext_270976 ([identity profile] keevacaereni.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] darkhairedgirl 2013-12-26 05:35 pm (UTC)

Okay

He does not answer – a first, Feuilly thinks
You just know Jehan is a complete chatterbox.

Feuilly cannot look away as he drinks: the muscles in Jehan’s throat contracting, Jehan’s mouth pressed to where his own was less than a moment before.
Oh hell. This is gorgeous.

the illumination of the setting sun turned his profile into a being of black and gold, shadows and light rather than flesh.
This is the most beautiful image. I can see it perfectly.

this kiss was one meant to communicate everything that had gone unsaid between them in the past; in case they were captured, in case they were killed, in case they never saw each other again – in equal parts a declaration, a memento, a goodbye.
*sobs*

The terror chokes but the love frees, and for the first time in hours, he feels like he can breathe.
I just can't with this. You are such a good writer and I love this so much. Thank you thank you thank you!

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